A true personal story
Doing everything with other people just tasted and felt normal for him but
Drinking tea with her tasted different
Having coffee with her tasted different
Having mocha with her tasted different
Having house-blend with her tasted different
Having pizza with her tasted so different
Walking with her felt different
Sitting with her felt different
Taking the bus with her felt different even if it was with the AC unit broken
Going to certain places with her felt different though he didn’t like those places
Having gyros (guss) with her tasted different
Reading something with her felt different
Watching TV with her felt different
Listening to music or radio with her tasted different
He didn’t feel the time when sat with her; time always passed by so fast
He felt so happy sitting with her
He missed her if she showed up late even for one second
He liked to see her every single moment and if she didn’t show up he expected every in-coming step was her.
Every time his door was knocked he wished it was her.
He liked talking to her
He liked her talk even if it sounded silly sometimes
He liked her voice
He liked the way she walked
He liked the way she talked
He liked the way she joked
He liked the way she laughed
He liked the way she smiled
He felt her pain when she was sick
He felt her so close; when she was sick he felt a part of his body was sick
He liked her stealing food from his plate
He felt different when she picked up food from his plate and felt all his plate turned out so delicious and sweet once she picked up something from his plate
He felt so comfortable talking to her
He liked to say out his secrets to her
He liked to share everything with her even a bite of food if possible
He liked sharing ideas with her
He liked her saying “I hate you” to him.
He liked the way she ate her food
He liked to do his best to help her though it took much of his time sometimes
He liked to see her happy and smiling all the time
He didn’t wanna see her sad or sick or tired
He felt uncomfortable seeing her tired
He accepted her excuses or apologies even if he knew it wasn’t true
He said he would stop waiting for her because she broke her promises most of the time but he changed his mind and forgot everything once he saw that smile in her face
Walking in nice places reminded him of her
Seeing nice views reminded him of her
Breathing fresh and breezy air reminded him of her
Eating cheese cake reminded him of her
Listening to music reminded him of her
Seeing flowers reminded him of her
When everytime seeing her he felt his heart wanna get off his body and hug her before he did
He felt she was the most precious thing in the whole world
IF he felt she was the most beautiful thing in the whole world
When she was with him he thought of nothing but how to make her comfortable
He liked to do whatever it took to make her happy
He liked her more than anything and anybody in this world
When his tears came down as he felt he wasn’t gonna see her anymore
copyright@: allawi2007@hotmail.com
Doing everything with other people just tasted and felt normal for him but
Drinking tea with her tasted different
Having coffee with her tasted different
Having mocha with her tasted different
Having house-blend with her tasted different
Having pizza with her tasted so different
Walking with her felt different
Sitting with her felt different
Taking the bus with her felt different even if it was with the AC unit broken
Going to certain places with her felt different though he didn’t like those places
Having gyros (guss) with her tasted different
Reading something with her felt different
Watching TV with her felt different
Listening to music or radio with her tasted different
He didn’t feel the time when sat with her; time always passed by so fast
He felt so happy sitting with her
He missed her if she showed up late even for one second
He liked to see her every single moment and if she didn’t show up he expected every in-coming step was her.
Every time his door was knocked he wished it was her.
He liked talking to her
He liked her talk even if it sounded silly sometimes
He liked her voice
He liked the way she walked
He liked the way she talked
He liked the way she joked
He liked the way she laughed
He liked the way she smiled
He felt her pain when she was sick
He felt her so close; when she was sick he felt a part of his body was sick
He liked her stealing food from his plate
He felt different when she picked up food from his plate and felt all his plate turned out so delicious and sweet once she picked up something from his plate
He felt so comfortable talking to her
He liked to say out his secrets to her
He liked to share everything with her even a bite of food if possible
He liked sharing ideas with her
He liked her saying “I hate you” to him.
He liked the way she ate her food
He liked to do his best to help her though it took much of his time sometimes
He liked to see her happy and smiling all the time
He didn’t wanna see her sad or sick or tired
He felt uncomfortable seeing her tired
He accepted her excuses or apologies even if he knew it wasn’t true
He said he would stop waiting for her because she broke her promises most of the time but he changed his mind and forgot everything once he saw that smile in her face
Walking in nice places reminded him of her
Seeing nice views reminded him of her
Breathing fresh and breezy air reminded him of her
Eating cheese cake reminded him of her
Listening to music reminded him of her
Seeing flowers reminded him of her
When everytime seeing her he felt his heart wanna get off his body and hug her before he did
He felt she was the most precious thing in the whole world
IF he felt she was the most beautiful thing in the whole world
When she was with him he thought of nothing but how to make her comfortable
He liked to do whatever it took to make her happy
He liked her more than anything and anybody in this world
When his tears came down as he felt he wasn’t gonna see her anymore
copyright@: allawi2007@hotmail.com
8 comments:
Remarkably different from the others posts in this blog. I loved the cuteness within the simplicity in which you penned down your thoughts. And, I felt bad when it hit me in the end.
A nice one Ali!!!
PS: My latest release is on missing someone too. Check it out while you are free.
Thanx for the comment. Yes, it is quite different. I just liked to escape away from routine for a while and indeed for a moment when I remembered her, I felt my pen forced me to write this down.
Thats beautiful Ali... reminded me of someone I used to know.. I smiled at the 'stealing food from his plate', I loved the fun and intimacy...thank you for sharing this...
Like Bros'... I went Awwwe, thats so sad, at the end
A'Jay!
Believe it or not! seeing her stealing food from my plate was one of the sweetest things coz sometimes little things mean alot; as it is said: "Sharing is Caring". Sometimes she kinda ate half of my dish leaving her plate aside but I really loved her doing that. And she was always like: "the food in your dish taste so different from mine!!"
"He liked to see her every single moment and if she didn’t show up he expected every in-coming step was her.The part which I LOVED!
very nice Ali,..i liked all the post actually
Miss Violet!
I am glad you liked it. Everything I said was true but still is way less than what I felt.
Wow, simple sentences but definitely evokes strong emotions. Makes me wonder if I could ever make someone feel like that.
Meena!
Everything there is 110% true. There are certain things in love that are unexplainable, and don't need to be pre-planned. I like simplicity in love.
Thanks for passing by.
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